ding!!! oh no its leaving. shouted Mr. bean. panting, Mr. bean ran, he jumped in then the door shut on his leg. ouch. oh some one said they helped him out, oh no my shoe. yay a seat he yelled. as he started reading some one laphed. ha haaaa haaa ha ha ha. hmm ah. he took off his socks and shoved them in his ears. ahh Mr. bean said. ah ha, he said while searching for gum. he took the gum and shoved the gum in his ears. can i check your pass port, he asked ah his book and ticket went fling out the window
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hello nick, First I would like to say the story was very good because you had some funny and strange parts. But not so many capital letters so that’s something you could ad next time. Also you had some spelling mistakes so that is another thing you could work on. But over all I liked it.