Dimmy swung and thwacked the the golf ball as hard as he could and it went flying. DIMMY!!!!!!!!!! that was our LAST golf ball. “But I didn’t mean to hit it that hard”. SMASH!!!!!!!!!!!!! The police stations window shattered. They knew who it was from the other 25 windows that were smashed. Grumpily a officer stomped his way towards dimmy. now you are working for the 5TUP1D police force until we can get those flipping windows fixed. What do I… RULE NUMBER 92648, DONT ASK QUESTIONS!!! This is going to be a long time till I can play golf again, Dimmy thought.
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Hello Nick,
Your story of Dimmy made me smile. It seems he might be on the way to being a golfing great or public enemy number one for the local police station.
Well done.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
Hi Nick, I really liked your story about the tennis ball. You used magnificent words like thwacked and swung. to make this writing even better, you could use better punctuation.